Kialandi Revamped...
Aug 1, 2013 20:08:13 GMT -5
Post by Brenton on Aug 1, 2013 20:08:13 GMT -5
Okay so I know it says Kialandi was not approved and then it wound up in the approved section so I will just remake him here.
Full Name: Kialandi Morzansson
Side: Neutral
Home: Vroengard
Age: Born 21 years before the Fall
Eyes: Forest Green
Hair: Snow White just like the color of his scales when he is a dragon
Magic User: Yes, as strong as the dragons but with the ability to control it through the Ancient Language
Appearance: Around six feet and three inches tall, Kialandi is rather broad of shoulders and wide in the chest with long arms and legs that are filled with muscles that would make a Kull look jealous. He has a rather well defined facial structure that looks like it is an elf's but is actually a mix between the two. Kialandi has medium length, shaggy white hair that covers his medium sized nose and forest green eyes as well as the scar across his left eyebrow and right upper lip. His skin is golden brown, eternally tanned, and is soft and smooth. He wears form fitting pants with thick black leather boots and a great black sword belt on his lower body while on his torso is a tight red shirt made of silk with a looser cotton shirt made of silver threads and a black tight leather jerkin that is covered in the back with a red, silver, and black cape. He has a pair of silver gauntlets with a silver half mask much like that of an assassin. When he is a dragon he is an ancient dragon of grand size with snow white scales. His weapon is a white bladed sword with black and red in the center crafted by a dragon spirit wizard back when the first wizards were just arriving. The blades name is Dragonsblood
Personality:
Kialandi is one of those people who is proud about everything he does and believes that there is nothing he can't do. He will argue until he is blue in the face and then continue arguing because he has to be right. Kialandi is stubborn and doesn't give up, in fact he has a never give up attitude. His thoughts of grudges is that there is often a reason to hate people so why give up on arguing. He holds grudges perfectly and is very stuck up at times. Kialandi hates when people correct him and is very calm at most times but will grow very aggressive when angered.
Strengths: nimble, very strong, have the power in magic as any other dragon.
Weaknesses: If nature is too damaged they feel it's pain, some of them are so poisonous the poison is their core and so if they are purified of the poison they shall die.
History:
It was a cold evening in the middle of the winter when a man walked through the snow toward the citadel of the Riders with his cape pulled close around his shoulders and his blade banging against his armored shins while he looked tired and ready to collapse from the fatigue of training. His large dragon flew overhead with him while the man traversed over the terrain without a second thought, absorbed in his day's journey from the mainland with his companion. He was close to the gate when a small whimper of pain echoed forth from the general area and made the man look up in confusion to find a bundle just a few feet away from him near the trees. It was a baby wrapped in wool cloth with a note handwritten and tucked in the blanket. The man had to read the note several times before he finally understood what was happening to him. This little boy, Kialandi, as the note said he should be named, was to be raised by the man who found him and that he was to be treated as an equal and his secret to be kept just that, a secret. So the man sighed and picked up the little boy in his arms and wrapped him in his cloak, setting off for the citadel quicker. The light hurt his eyes but soon the man entered the citadel and the boy was put down in a bed next to a flame that crackled. Years passed until the baby was five years old and could start actually doing things worth while.
The boy was found five years earlier out in the wild and raised by Morzan, rider and friend of Galbatorix. Now he was named Kialandi and already showing strength in fighting and magic for he could best even those who were double his age in hand to hand combat while he could levitate stones off the palm of his hand. Yet his concentration was easily broken because of his youth and so Morzan was forced to find the boy a dragon for he felt this was sure to be a strong rider if Kialandi could already show such promise in magic and sword combat. Kialandi was given an egg each week for his training as the days grew by and he showed more physical and mental prowess. Yet he was also showing great weaknesses in the fights for he couldn't stand to see even a weed trampled under foot by a soldier without weeping for the plant.
Kialandi was unfortunately not able to find a dragon egg to hatch for him and so when he turned seventeen the riders focused their attention on younger candidates while training him as a normal soldier. Yet he surpassed even the yearling riders and soon was forced to spar with stronger enemies and soon was fighting with people who had spent decades getting to his level. He was all that they could talk about and so when Kialandi was twenty years old he was ridiculed by a female rider who he had been falling for. It had been several months and Kialandi had been able to fight and beat every suitor for Maria, the woman, but she wasn't impressed so she started with low blows by saying that yes he could beat riders all around but he couldn't ever be one because no dragon wanted to be with him. Kialandi was sent into a fit of rage and as he drew his sword his vision clouded and soon he felt like the world had shrunk to a miniature model of it. Upon another look he discovered that he was actually larger and a...dragon. The woman rider screamed but the next thing he knew, Kialandi was unconscious and heading toward Alagaesia on dragonback as a human.
Kialandi did not awake again for many years as Morzan had not been able to accept who his son was and had put him under a spell to sleep for many years until the world were to forget of him. Unfortunately that meant he was to sleep through the Fall and awoke to discover that Galbatorix had taken his father and corrupted him and set the riders against each other. The dragon spirit did everything he could and soon he killed several Forsworn allies. Kialandi had been present when Eragon arrived at Farthen Dur, under the alias of Evan Durransson, for no one approved of Morzan. He was also there when Murtagh was captured and Durza was killed. Soon the Dragon spirit fled to the forest of the elves to live with them for awhile.
((I am going to get rid of Dyami...so Urak Thar is on his own now...))
Full Name: Kialandi Morzansson
Side: Neutral
Home: Vroengard
Age: Born 21 years before the Fall
Eyes: Forest Green
Hair: Snow White just like the color of his scales when he is a dragon
Magic User: Yes, as strong as the dragons but with the ability to control it through the Ancient Language
Appearance: Around six feet and three inches tall, Kialandi is rather broad of shoulders and wide in the chest with long arms and legs that are filled with muscles that would make a Kull look jealous. He has a rather well defined facial structure that looks like it is an elf's but is actually a mix between the two. Kialandi has medium length, shaggy white hair that covers his medium sized nose and forest green eyes as well as the scar across his left eyebrow and right upper lip. His skin is golden brown, eternally tanned, and is soft and smooth. He wears form fitting pants with thick black leather boots and a great black sword belt on his lower body while on his torso is a tight red shirt made of silk with a looser cotton shirt made of silver threads and a black tight leather jerkin that is covered in the back with a red, silver, and black cape. He has a pair of silver gauntlets with a silver half mask much like that of an assassin. When he is a dragon he is an ancient dragon of grand size with snow white scales. His weapon is a white bladed sword with black and red in the center crafted by a dragon spirit wizard back when the first wizards were just arriving. The blades name is Dragonsblood
Personality:
Kialandi is one of those people who is proud about everything he does and believes that there is nothing he can't do. He will argue until he is blue in the face and then continue arguing because he has to be right. Kialandi is stubborn and doesn't give up, in fact he has a never give up attitude. His thoughts of grudges is that there is often a reason to hate people so why give up on arguing. He holds grudges perfectly and is very stuck up at times. Kialandi hates when people correct him and is very calm at most times but will grow very aggressive when angered.
Strengths: nimble, very strong, have the power in magic as any other dragon.
Weaknesses: If nature is too damaged they feel it's pain, some of them are so poisonous the poison is their core and so if they are purified of the poison they shall die.
History:
It was a cold evening in the middle of the winter when a man walked through the snow toward the citadel of the Riders with his cape pulled close around his shoulders and his blade banging against his armored shins while he looked tired and ready to collapse from the fatigue of training. His large dragon flew overhead with him while the man traversed over the terrain without a second thought, absorbed in his day's journey from the mainland with his companion. He was close to the gate when a small whimper of pain echoed forth from the general area and made the man look up in confusion to find a bundle just a few feet away from him near the trees. It was a baby wrapped in wool cloth with a note handwritten and tucked in the blanket. The man had to read the note several times before he finally understood what was happening to him. This little boy, Kialandi, as the note said he should be named, was to be raised by the man who found him and that he was to be treated as an equal and his secret to be kept just that, a secret. So the man sighed and picked up the little boy in his arms and wrapped him in his cloak, setting off for the citadel quicker. The light hurt his eyes but soon the man entered the citadel and the boy was put down in a bed next to a flame that crackled. Years passed until the baby was five years old and could start actually doing things worth while.
The boy was found five years earlier out in the wild and raised by Morzan, rider and friend of Galbatorix. Now he was named Kialandi and already showing strength in fighting and magic for he could best even those who were double his age in hand to hand combat while he could levitate stones off the palm of his hand. Yet his concentration was easily broken because of his youth and so Morzan was forced to find the boy a dragon for he felt this was sure to be a strong rider if Kialandi could already show such promise in magic and sword combat. Kialandi was given an egg each week for his training as the days grew by and he showed more physical and mental prowess. Yet he was also showing great weaknesses in the fights for he couldn't stand to see even a weed trampled under foot by a soldier without weeping for the plant.
Kialandi was unfortunately not able to find a dragon egg to hatch for him and so when he turned seventeen the riders focused their attention on younger candidates while training him as a normal soldier. Yet he surpassed even the yearling riders and soon was forced to spar with stronger enemies and soon was fighting with people who had spent decades getting to his level. He was all that they could talk about and so when Kialandi was twenty years old he was ridiculed by a female rider who he had been falling for. It had been several months and Kialandi had been able to fight and beat every suitor for Maria, the woman, but she wasn't impressed so she started with low blows by saying that yes he could beat riders all around but he couldn't ever be one because no dragon wanted to be with him. Kialandi was sent into a fit of rage and as he drew his sword his vision clouded and soon he felt like the world had shrunk to a miniature model of it. Upon another look he discovered that he was actually larger and a...dragon. The woman rider screamed but the next thing he knew, Kialandi was unconscious and heading toward Alagaesia on dragonback as a human.
Kialandi did not awake again for many years as Morzan had not been able to accept who his son was and had put him under a spell to sleep for many years until the world were to forget of him. Unfortunately that meant he was to sleep through the Fall and awoke to discover that Galbatorix had taken his father and corrupted him and set the riders against each other. The dragon spirit did everything he could and soon he killed several Forsworn allies. Kialandi had been present when Eragon arrived at Farthen Dur, under the alias of Evan Durransson, for no one approved of Morzan. He was also there when Murtagh was captured and Durza was killed. Soon the Dragon spirit fled to the forest of the elves to live with them for awhile.
((I am going to get rid of Dyami...so Urak Thar is on his own now...))
