Urgal charecter Kredok Bhargon FIXED
Jan 11, 2012 10:33:53 GMT -5
Post by martinj1996 on Jan 11, 2012 10:33:53 GMT -5
Full Name: Kredok Bhargon
Other name: Skull crusher
Race:Urgal
Side: Varden
Birthplace: Spine
Age:35
Gender:Male
Eyes:Blood red
Hair: Dark black
Weight:265 pounds of muscle
Height: 6'6
Magic User:no
Preferred Weapon(s):His Magicaly reinforced club Skullbreaker
Appearance: Tall urgal but not a kull Dark black Hair large curved horns one of them is broken in 2
Likes: killing fighting battle His club His mother
Dislikes: people who dishonor him and pepole who insult him and his mother
Strengths: massive phisical strength and good eyesight and sense of smell
Weakness: dull witted eaislily goes into blood rage cannot control his blood rage
Family:father (deceased) mother kroloese (tribal shaman
Not-So-Brief History: Kredok was always strong from a young age he traveled in a small tribe in which his mother was the shaman of, their war cheif was Nar Gharzvog. Kredok claimed his first hunt at a younger age than most of his tribe but his mother was the shaman so she allowed it. his first kill was nagra he beat it to death with a club he made of wood from then on he trained with a club as his weapon of choice. instead of using the crude one he made on his hunt he fashioned this club out of an ironwood tree wrapped three strips of iron around it and studded the iron with the teeth of a cave bear he had killed. he named this Club Bloodhunt and from then on it was his only weapon he used besides his own fists. He quickly rose in ranks into the most powerful warriors of his tribe he was sent into battle with the most powerfull kull rams and soon he became part of nar gharzvogs personal guard. Kredok soon found out that their tribe would soon be joining the varden to do battle against the lack horned betrayer galbatorix> and the also learned that he was going to be led into battle by the mighty firesword eragon shadeslayer. He was so excited to be able and he knew that he would be a great warrior in the varden.He knew he would have to prove himself a great warrior to fit in with the varden and he knew that he would win much glory in the time he spent being in the varden.And as he came closer to the gates of uru baen and the lack horned betrayer galbatorix He became Stronger than all but the strongest kull and his horns were far more impressive than most other kull. but he felt no hint of his pride that he was begining to show in himself one of his fatal flaws and now he marched into battle carrying his trusted club to defeat all who stand before him and he knew the empire would fall at his knees and beg for mercy.(insert evil laugh here)
Other name: Skull crusher
Race:Urgal
Side: Varden
Birthplace: Spine
Age:35
Gender:Male
Eyes:Blood red
Hair: Dark black
Weight:265 pounds of muscle
Height: 6'6
Magic User:no
Preferred Weapon(s):His Magicaly reinforced club Skullbreaker
Appearance: Tall urgal but not a kull Dark black Hair large curved horns one of them is broken in 2
Likes: killing fighting battle His club His mother
Dislikes: people who dishonor him and pepole who insult him and his mother
Strengths: massive phisical strength and good eyesight and sense of smell
Weakness: dull witted eaislily goes into blood rage cannot control his blood rage
Family:father (deceased) mother kroloese (tribal shaman
Not-So-Brief History: Kredok was always strong from a young age he traveled in a small tribe in which his mother was the shaman of, their war cheif was Nar Gharzvog. Kredok claimed his first hunt at a younger age than most of his tribe but his mother was the shaman so she allowed it. his first kill was nagra he beat it to death with a club he made of wood from then on he trained with a club as his weapon of choice. instead of using the crude one he made on his hunt he fashioned this club out of an ironwood tree wrapped three strips of iron around it and studded the iron with the teeth of a cave bear he had killed. he named this Club Bloodhunt and from then on it was his only weapon he used besides his own fists. He quickly rose in ranks into the most powerful warriors of his tribe he was sent into battle with the most powerfull kull rams and soon he became part of nar gharzvogs personal guard. Kredok soon found out that their tribe would soon be joining the varden to do battle against the lack horned betrayer galbatorix> and the also learned that he was going to be led into battle by the mighty firesword eragon shadeslayer. He was so excited to be able and he knew that he would be a great warrior in the varden.He knew he would have to prove himself a great warrior to fit in with the varden and he knew that he would win much glory in the time he spent being in the varden.And as he came closer to the gates of uru baen and the lack horned betrayer galbatorix He became Stronger than all but the strongest kull and his horns were far more impressive than most other kull. but he felt no hint of his pride that he was begining to show in himself one of his fatal flaws and now he marched into battle carrying his trusted club to defeat all who stand before him and he knew the empire would fall at his knees and beg for mercy.(insert evil laugh here)
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