Nelfarion
Aug 27, 2013 17:38:02 GMT -5
Post by Aelodil on Aug 27, 2013 17:38:02 GMT -5
Hey, before you start reading my app, I know many of you probably think I already have too many characters -- and I don't blame you. But honestly, my problem is my characters just aren't in active threads. As you've all probably seen, I've shown effort into making quick, but good posts and I enjoy the pressure. So, putting that aside, I hope you like the small twist I put to this character. Also, I realize he is rather OP which is why I will not use everything I added into this bio. Also, as an extra thought, I think it would be a nice idea to have him become the new Forsworn's leader *Brenton's new character* dragon. Both of them want the world to be destroyed and such. So if Brenton agrees I'll roll that out. Thank you!
Name: Nelfarion
Side: Um, not sure really. I mean, he kinda hates everyone so I don't know what category to put him in. So basically he's aggressive towards everyone
Birthplace: Somewhere in the caves underground in barrens at the vast desert.
Was His/Her egg found in the wild or by the Varden/Empire?: It was found in the wild by a group of evil Dragon Spirits.
Age: 897
Gender: Male
Eyes: Red
Scale Color: Nelfarion's scales were black but as he fought the mad Dragon Spirits who had found and forcibly hatched his egg, the amount of energy threatened to rip his body. This exposed the lava and seething fury underneath, having small speckles of red molten rocks underneath his scales. In addition, he had minions attach mithril armor to his body to keep it together, such as his jaw and other places of his body.
Appearance: Nelfarion easily stands out as he is huge due to the meddling of the mad Dragon Spirits. Although he is not yet 1,000 years old he is easily large enough to be passed by as a volcano or two. His huge metal scales around his body, his sole weakness, also stand out being sewn into his body to keep it from falling apart. He is always burning with lava and flames, making him rather hard not to spot along with his size. His chest, being ripped apart, has a huge metal plate on it and in the middle of it is the core of his essence. He is easily one of the most largest dragons along with Shruikan, but out of all the remaining dragons the most unstable and dangerous. In his human form, he is bald with his whole body like a volcano with veins of lava streaming, easy to see under his parched barely visible skin.
Personality: Nelfarion, until he was turned into an abomination was kind, gentle, and caring. Though after a few months with his mad cousins, he became a destructive force with his brain intact but with not many more emotions other than hatred, revenge, and seething anger. Now he is just a bane to all living things and will stop at nothing and stoop to any level to obliterate all life. Nelfarion knows now friends. Partners at times if he needs their abilities to go places he can't, but no, not friends. Tools. Partners at best. That was all he knew. Since he used to be a Dragon Spirit, he still retains his ability to become a human though very few times has he done so as his human state is hideous.
Likes: Destruction, Mayhem, Death, Murder, Chaos.
Dislikes: Tranquility, Peace, Life.
Strengths: Large, Has no regards for life or death, His old age, Being an abomination he is still a Dragon Spirit and can use destructive magic whenever needed.
Weaknesses: Is usually contained, His mithril armor that covers the parts of his body that had been teared apart, His hatred blinds him.
History:
Shortly after his egg being laid, Nelfarion's parents died. They were murdered by the same corrupt Dragon Spirits that would later on come for him. Poor little Nelfarion's egg hatched just as the same people who murdered his parents happened to pass by. Taking the egg, they went to their underground holdout and began experimenting on him just as he hatched. He attempted to protest however he did not manage to escape and soon went mad. The Dragon Spirits gave him his name and used him as a test subject. They corrupted him with their evil magic, so evil it was worse than a Shade's magic. Everyday poor Nelfarion went through this all, injecting him with this, and sometimes even putting another dragons essence into him. Finally, on one day however, they did something worse.
They woke him up at the age of 15, still uncapable of using his powers as a Dragon Spirit to turn into his human form. They brought him to an arena. At the age of 15 years, Nelfarion should be large. However large wasn't his description. Huge was his description as the mad Dragon Spirits had infused him with such vile stuff. In front of him, a gate opened and out came ten different dragons. Each different sizes and scale colors. Scared, Nelfarion backed away but as he backed, the mad Dragon Spirits brandished weapons while a few turned to dragons and snapped their jaws, gesturing for him to fight.
With nothing else to do, Nelfarion roared and swung his massive claw at the other dragons, knocking 3 of them so hard they slammed into the caves' wall and caused a tremor above them. He bathed the rest in such intense heat the little sand there fused into raw glass. He shuddered in anger, driven by his fury at the Dragon Spirits and brutally slaughtered the remaining dragons. The mad Dragon Spirits were awed instead of afraid. As they closed the gate on him in that same arena, he ticked. The spirits of the dragons he had slaughtered were ancient and strong. He took the eldunari of the oldest ones who had retreated into it in desperation and channeled the combined power into one big orb known as The Dragon Soul. He channeled the energy in the Dragon Soul against the other Dragon Spirits. In moments his captors died. And soon he might have too. The Dragon Soul was expired of all power, all of it ending up inside of him due to an accident and all this power he channeled was too much.
The power overcame his body and began tearing him apart. He broke through the top, cracking the earth and went into hiding underground, where he found lava. He hid in the lava though dragons glimpsed him as he went into hiding. His skin teared apart they could see the lava underneath it in his body. The seething anger that formed the lava under his skin. His flaming heart. The molten core. As he hid, he had Urgul minions form large mithril plates to cover his body. One large one went on his lower jaw, another covering his entire chest, and more covering his back. He also had multiple more all across his body. Finally, when the time was ripe, after 882 years of hiding, he awakened.
As his minions finished their job, he buckled, sending hundreds of them to their doom in the lava. He raised his massive hand out and gripped the earth from above. He roared and flew out, causing a fissure to appear where he had once hidden, all his minions dead after he left. He emptied his anger on the world. Until he met him. Ashendale. He met him and soon regarded him as a partner. Then soon after that, as a comrade and still now he is seen flying, always near Ashendale in case he is needed.
Anything Extra: I took Brenton's approval on the whole Ashendale-Nelfarion Rider/Dragon part thing. Also, just to clear it out, Nelfarion is mostly just a dragon as he never is in his human form. Also , being corrupted, he no longer has ties to nature. And as I said, I will not be using everything I added into here or else he would be too OP. Thank you!
Name: Nelfarion
Side: Um, not sure really. I mean, he kinda hates everyone so I don't know what category to put him in. So basically he's aggressive towards everyone
Birthplace: Somewhere in the caves underground in barrens at the vast desert.
Was His/Her egg found in the wild or by the Varden/Empire?: It was found in the wild by a group of evil Dragon Spirits.
Age: 897
Gender: Male
Eyes: Red
Scale Color: Nelfarion's scales were black but as he fought the mad Dragon Spirits who had found and forcibly hatched his egg, the amount of energy threatened to rip his body. This exposed the lava and seething fury underneath, having small speckles of red molten rocks underneath his scales. In addition, he had minions attach mithril armor to his body to keep it together, such as his jaw and other places of his body.
Appearance: Nelfarion easily stands out as he is huge due to the meddling of the mad Dragon Spirits. Although he is not yet 1,000 years old he is easily large enough to be passed by as a volcano or two. His huge metal scales around his body, his sole weakness, also stand out being sewn into his body to keep it from falling apart. He is always burning with lava and flames, making him rather hard not to spot along with his size. His chest, being ripped apart, has a huge metal plate on it and in the middle of it is the core of his essence. He is easily one of the most largest dragons along with Shruikan, but out of all the remaining dragons the most unstable and dangerous. In his human form, he is bald with his whole body like a volcano with veins of lava streaming, easy to see under his parched barely visible skin.
Personality: Nelfarion, until he was turned into an abomination was kind, gentle, and caring. Though after a few months with his mad cousins, he became a destructive force with his brain intact but with not many more emotions other than hatred, revenge, and seething anger. Now he is just a bane to all living things and will stop at nothing and stoop to any level to obliterate all life. Nelfarion knows now friends. Partners at times if he needs their abilities to go places he can't, but no, not friends. Tools. Partners at best. That was all he knew. Since he used to be a Dragon Spirit, he still retains his ability to become a human though very few times has he done so as his human state is hideous.
Likes: Destruction, Mayhem, Death, Murder, Chaos.
Dislikes: Tranquility, Peace, Life.
Strengths: Large, Has no regards for life or death, His old age, Being an abomination he is still a Dragon Spirit and can use destructive magic whenever needed.
Weaknesses: Is usually contained, His mithril armor that covers the parts of his body that had been teared apart, His hatred blinds him.
History:
Shortly after his egg being laid, Nelfarion's parents died. They were murdered by the same corrupt Dragon Spirits that would later on come for him. Poor little Nelfarion's egg hatched just as the same people who murdered his parents happened to pass by. Taking the egg, they went to their underground holdout and began experimenting on him just as he hatched. He attempted to protest however he did not manage to escape and soon went mad. The Dragon Spirits gave him his name and used him as a test subject. They corrupted him with their evil magic, so evil it was worse than a Shade's magic. Everyday poor Nelfarion went through this all, injecting him with this, and sometimes even putting another dragons essence into him. Finally, on one day however, they did something worse.
They woke him up at the age of 15, still uncapable of using his powers as a Dragon Spirit to turn into his human form. They brought him to an arena. At the age of 15 years, Nelfarion should be large. However large wasn't his description. Huge was his description as the mad Dragon Spirits had infused him with such vile stuff. In front of him, a gate opened and out came ten different dragons. Each different sizes and scale colors. Scared, Nelfarion backed away but as he backed, the mad Dragon Spirits brandished weapons while a few turned to dragons and snapped their jaws, gesturing for him to fight.
With nothing else to do, Nelfarion roared and swung his massive claw at the other dragons, knocking 3 of them so hard they slammed into the caves' wall and caused a tremor above them. He bathed the rest in such intense heat the little sand there fused into raw glass. He shuddered in anger, driven by his fury at the Dragon Spirits and brutally slaughtered the remaining dragons. The mad Dragon Spirits were awed instead of afraid. As they closed the gate on him in that same arena, he ticked. The spirits of the dragons he had slaughtered were ancient and strong. He took the eldunari of the oldest ones who had retreated into it in desperation and channeled the combined power into one big orb known as The Dragon Soul. He channeled the energy in the Dragon Soul against the other Dragon Spirits. In moments his captors died. And soon he might have too. The Dragon Soul was expired of all power, all of it ending up inside of him due to an accident and all this power he channeled was too much.
The power overcame his body and began tearing him apart. He broke through the top, cracking the earth and went into hiding underground, where he found lava. He hid in the lava though dragons glimpsed him as he went into hiding. His skin teared apart they could see the lava underneath it in his body. The seething anger that formed the lava under his skin. His flaming heart. The molten core. As he hid, he had Urgul minions form large mithril plates to cover his body. One large one went on his lower jaw, another covering his entire chest, and more covering his back. He also had multiple more all across his body. Finally, when the time was ripe, after 882 years of hiding, he awakened.
As his minions finished their job, he buckled, sending hundreds of them to their doom in the lava. He raised his massive hand out and gripped the earth from above. He roared and flew out, causing a fissure to appear where he had once hidden, all his minions dead after he left. He emptied his anger on the world. Until he met him. Ashendale. He met him and soon regarded him as a partner. Then soon after that, as a comrade and still now he is seen flying, always near Ashendale in case he is needed.
Anything Extra: I took Brenton's approval on the whole Ashendale-Nelfarion Rider/Dragon part thing. Also, just to clear it out, Nelfarion is mostly just a dragon as he never is in his human form. Also , being corrupted, he no longer has ties to nature. And as I said, I will not be using everything I added into here or else he would be too OP. Thank you!
