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Madic
Jul 3, 2007 15:04:59 GMT -5
Post by madic on Jul 3, 2007 15:04:59 GMT -5
Full Name: Raen Enos
Other name: Madic (shade name)
Race:: Shade
Side: Empire
Birthplace: Uru' Baen
Age: 137
Gender: Male
Birthday: 137 years before burning plains battle
Eyes: Crimson
Hair: Deep red
Weight: 130 lbs
Height: 6'5"
Magic User: Yes
Clothing: Jet Black Leathers, armor similar to that of durza's elite, with small additions
Preferred Weapon(s): Steel longsword
Personality: Dark and cruel
Likes/Dislikes: likes necromancy, bloodshed, and a good brandy, dislikes urgals, the varden, and dimwits
Family: None surviving
Brief History: Several years after his birth, his father, a reputable sorceror, Fed his son's interests in sorcery. An unnatural talent and a liking to a particular spirit made his father very cautious. At a certain point when the spirit attempted to control raen, his father ceased training him altogether.
Raen grew angry and summoned the spirit in anger, emotions uncontrolled. at the age of seventeen, Raen was controlled by a spirit, becoming Madic.
During a raid on an urgal camp, Madic was found by a empire patrol, basking in triumph and reveling in the blood of his enemies. a show of such ruthlessness caught the eye of galbatorix, who sent a band of soldiers to offer a position under galbatorix.
For the following years, Madic has not so secretly comitted murders of the enemies of Galbatorix, as well as random raids of camps, urgal and varden alike, making him a thing of nightmares.
Anything extra:
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Madic
Jul 5, 2007 2:00:45 GMT -5
Post by Vardy on Jul 5, 2007 2:00:45 GMT -5
We aren't accepting any more riders, or elves, last I checked. So, you could make your character a human, a shade, or one of the other available races. He needs a birthday and birthplace. You can't have a sword with a colored blade; or one with a jewel. The profile needs way more detail. Flesh out his personality and history, and he needs likes and dislikes, you probably need more in family as well.
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Madic
Jul 5, 2007 19:11:17 GMT -5
Post by madic on Jul 5, 2007 19:11:17 GMT -5
fixed
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Madic
Jul 8, 2007 11:30:19 GMT -5
Post by Nihael on Jul 8, 2007 11:30:19 GMT -5
Give him a few more likes/dislikes than the rather plain ones... try and flesh out his history... you could put in how he came to start working for Galbatorix, etc.
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Madic
Jul 18, 2007 13:44:23 GMT -5
Post by madic on Jul 18, 2007 13:44:23 GMT -5
got it. (i think)
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Madic
Jul 20, 2007 3:27:30 GMT -5
Post by Nihael on Jul 20, 2007 3:27:30 GMT -5
Hmmm... eh. Sure.
Accepted.
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