Beriadan

[fulcon]

Full Name: Beriadan Treatleson

Other name: Beri

Race:: Human

Side: Varden

Birthplace: Farthen Dur

Age: (Does it have to be 20+? Eragon's 15-16.) 20

Gender: Male

Birthday: July 17

Eyes: Brown

Hair: A thick mat of hair on the top of his head, with it being half thinner on the sides of his head.

Weight: 175 lbs

Height: 5'9

Magic User: Yes.

Preferred Weapon(s): Mostly he uses his dagger...just a steel blade, nothing special.

Personality: Beriadan is extremely arrogant...he believes magic is the most powerful force in nature, and he uses it as such. He has a condescending and holier-than-thou attitude toward non-magic users, but he practically worships elves and dragons. To them, he is reverently respectful...to his peers, he is known for his sharp tongue and merry nature.

Appearance: He has a slim body, and he is most likely to be seen in fancy clothes or armor...often with shades of blue and gold.

Likes/Dislikes: He like's magic users, intelligent conversations, Elves and Dragons. He detests non-magic users on basis of them being 'inferior', beer or any alcoholic drinks for their ability to make even the smartest person babble like an idiot, and he dislikes Urgal's on Principal.

Strengths: He's a strong magic user as far as human's go.

Weakness: While he uses a dagger when he has too, he's absolutely hopeless at it, and often finds himself saved by a warrior (usually non-magic) at his immense irritation.

Family: He was taught magic by his now-deceased father Treatle...he does not know of any other family.

Not-So-Brief History: He was born in Farthen Dur, his mother dying giving birth to him. During the course of his childhood, he learned he had a gift for magic... something his father started honing as soon as he could. It was also from Treatle that he got his superiority complex over his teen years. He joined the Du Vranger Gata as soon as he could, and has aided the Varden with his spells since.

His father died during the battle of Farthen Dur, something Beri took hard. His father could be identified as his only companion, and his loss hardened Beri.

He is currently rather disgruntled at the thought of Nasuada leading the Varden, she having displayed no magical ability what-so-ever...this turning into silent anger when she allied the Varden with the Urgals...

Anything extra: Really, in his course for being more powerful, he is searching for loop-holes in the magical system for exploitation. (Are permanent magical changes to the body allowed? They just take more energy to do?)

Password: [[Witch of Teirm]]

[Arkantos]

While I enjoy the character's personality immensely, I have a slight problem with continuity. How can he have a slim build if he's 200 pounds and 5'7"? Trust me, I know how that would work out, and he wouldn't be slim at all. So, apart from that, you're password's wrong. That's really the only problems that are outstanding to me. Fix those, and you should be good to go.

[fulcon]

200 and 5'7? WHOOPS.

I'm going to fix that...(and I looked at the rules and they didn't tell me how to do the password. Advice, please?)

EDIT: Fixed as far as weight and height goes.

[fulcon]

Thread bump!

[Arkantos]

*bump is noticed* Alright...better. Let me help you out here somewhat. The password is going to be standing out, much like [[This]], okay? I believe the rest of the password (it's a 3-word thing) is in the "Additional Characters" thread. I think. Danny never mentioned where exactly the rest of it was, and my char. sheets were app'd before the password system was initiated. Either way, just hunt around in the "Starting Out" section, and you'll find all of it in the first post of a thread.

[dannylam4]

I didn't do that =[Admin Edit]=... did you? O.o

[fulcon]

I did because I thought that's how you did it...(I know, I'm lame.)

Sorry...T_T

[Rhaxta]

I love the personality, though I'd try give more depth and length to the whole application in general. The password is hiding between [[ ][] in two parts, one in rules, one in additional. Just look through it all and read it (it's all needed) and you'll find it. It's a phrase of three words, more pass phrase than word. All in all, I like this character, I look forward to RPing with you when you get accepted.

ps. Oh, and if he can use magic he'd be a magician, not just human. <:

[fulcon]

HAHAHA! I think I fixed my password...finally.

[Rhaxta]

Close, but you over-thought it. Just use the words there, no need to translate to your own title.

[fulcon]

I hope that's right...

[Arkantos]

Almost. I suppose we're going to have to be rather strict on it. Just copy/paste, friend, and you'll be good to go.

[fulcon]

Now?

[Arkantos]

*stares*.......*looks closely*.......*compares long series of notes*.......YES. THE AUTHORITY HAS DECREED THAT THIS ADVENTURER BE APPROVED TO ENGAGE IN PLOT EVENTS AS OF NOW. SO SAYS OZYMANDIAS.

-approved