feanaro ancalime (varden rider)
Nov 25, 2011 1:15:13 GMT -5
Post by fëanàro on Nov 25, 2011 1:15:13 GMT -5
FullName: Feanaro ancalime
Other name: glennodad
Race: elf
Birthplace: ellesmera
Age: 53
Gender: Male
Birthday: first week of winter
Eyes: hazel greenish eyes
Hair: dark brown medium length and messy
Weight:205lbs
Height:5'10
Magic user: yes
Preferred weapons: feanaro carries two short swords on his back they are both paper thin and slightly curves as the blades reache there tip instead if a rider blade he had the two short swords made. On his hip he carries a hunting knife. Feanaro also has an elven bow he sung from a tree strung up on his back and a quill full of goose feathered arrows
Appearance: feanaro is slightly more stalky then most elfs due to his obsession with swordsmanship and training he is very lean with smooth skin his eyes are slightly narrow giving the appreance of squinting slightly . he sports a vest with a long sleeve shirt under it with pants and brown boots
Likes: sparring,reading,nature,animals,meditation, praticeing magic,flying and being with draven.
Dislikes:war,evil,dishonor,
Strength: his ability for quick thinking, never willing to admit defeat,swordsmanship, hand to hand combat,
Weakness: tends to think harder not smarter, can be arrogant at times or seem thingyy, he knows a lot about magic but tends to have trouble with spells. He also tends to go with brute force when he gets angry. Also has a bad temper but keeps it at bay but once he is angered feanaro will do and say things he normally wouldn't
Family: deraj (father) (solider for the queen)
Ninorc (mother)
Not so breif History: feanaro was born from his father deraj a high ranking solider to the queens army deraj was known for being well adapt with a blade. His mother ninorc who was a poet that was known for her beautyfull words and knowledge of many many things. From the time feanaro was young he wanted to follow in his fathers foot steps and be a great solider an swordsman he spent many days watching his father spar most of the time doin his best to copy deraj since his father was no longer with the army he still helped out but spent his time mastering other things. When feanaro reached proper age his father agreed to teach him all he knew if only feanaro promised to also take up studys with his mother because as his father said a sharp mind can kill just as quick as a blade. Feanaro agreed and from then he spent hours with his father when they could learning foot work,stances,attacks and counter attacks Then on some days he learned how to use his hands and feet as well most sessions ended with feanaro tierd,bruised and sore. On his days to rest feanaro spent the time reading and studying and thanks to his mother he gaind a love of books and the thirst for knowledge they posses.
As feanaro grew in age and skill his parients aided him in different aspects his father with combat and all its aspect fighting with and with out weapons.from his mother he learned meditation how to guard and reach out with his mind how to love and respect nature and all its inhabitants. One of feanaros favorite things to read about an hear about were the dragon Riders once he got a taste of the riders he couldn't get enugh he wanted to be one so bad it made his very heart ache it became his obsession he strived to be as good as the riders in all aspects. So for years feanaro put his heart and soul into being the best he could be but his main weakness his anger halted him in some ways for he would grow angry in sparring with his father for he could hardly touch him so he would lose most sense and attack blindly no matter how many times his father told him "an angry mind is a narrow mind". With his studies he grew upset when struggling with spells causing him to give up easily feanaro knew it took time to be as wise as his parients but he wanted to be the best and didn't want to wait.
As years passed an feanaro reached his adult hood of 18 he wanted to be a solider just like his father. At his age he was quite good with his swords for at one point his father suggested two short swords instead of on long sword after that feanaro noticed a difference in his matches with his father he was articulate above his years as well. after much talk and heavy pondering his parients agreed to allow feanaro to join the queens army instead of becoming a scholar After fortyfive years in the queens army feanaro grew into a man his endless training in magic and swordsmanship as most all elves are most efficient in both he grew into his frame becoming good looking and growing lean muscle. He noticed in training that thanks to his parients he exceeded most when training but his temper still earned him cuts breaks and bruises that could have been otherwise avoided Since the elves helped the vardens cause feanaro spent a lot of time ferrying between ellesmera and the varden helping wear ever he could wile also still practiceing when he could with his parients.
Around his 45th year as a solider feanaro was summond to the queens chambers in the early hours of the morning along with a few other highly skilld higher ranking soldiers. The queen informed them that the varden had come apon a dragon egg and fearing for its safety wanted the elves to take it for safe keeping and to see if it would hatch. There orders were to get the egg safely from the varden to ellesmera at any cost Over come with excitement feanaro did well to keep fealings hidden the thought seeing a dragon egg and possibly a new rider excited him beyond anything he felt before.after swearing oaths in the ancient language the group was sent off to get ready for they had to set off at once Feanaro informed his parients that he had a mission to go on but couldn't tell them what due to his oaths and at dawn him and his group set off.
It took longer then feanaro had expected but he figured that was his over anxiousness takeing over but the trip went smoothly besides running the ocassional urgles.once they arrived at the varden they had no time to stay ajihad the leader of the varden met them in secret to hand the egg off almost as quickly as they got there they left. The trip back to ellesmera was a tense one feanaro kept his cool but he expected to be attacked any momment and at every turn but there return went without trouble.the trip to the varden and back was a long one and feanaro was glad it was over he longed to see his parients and to get the egg to safety once they arrived home feanaro and his comrades hurried to the queens chambers to present her with the egg. Once the queen took the bundle from feanaro she unwrapped it revealing a greenish blue dragon egg feanaro couldn't keep his eyes off the egg it was perfect and beautiful smooth all around with small silver lines running round it like veins. He watched as the queen placed the egg on a table with a groove dug in it for the egg to sit in with out falling the queen looking more pleased then she has in some time then informed feanaro and his brothers in arms that for there services they will each be able to approach the egg to see if it will hatch.
Feanaro wanted to faint from excitement he knew that the odds of the dragon egg hatching for him would be slim but the prospect of even being one of the first made him want to back flip for joy but he held his composer. After about 5of his friends and comrades approached the egg with no luck it was feanaros turn his child hood dreams rushing thru his head like a blur everything he worked for and day dreamed about was sitting right infront of him all it had to do was hatch. Feanaro approached the egg cautiously and slowly worried that it wouldn't hatch for him but finally the momment arrived and he stood infront of the egg. "This is it" he thought as his hand extended to touch the egg it was smoother then any gem and warm to the touch feanaro grew grim when he felt the slow beat of a heart from within and then the egg stirred for a momment and fell silent and still. Removing his hand feanaro hung his head and stept away and began to head for the exit when the egg sturdier again but this time more violent and then a small crack appeared on the egg. his heart was almost in his throte as he stept back to the table and the egg shook an cracked again Feanaro looked at the others In the the room the queen seemed excited as well as the others some were looking at him and some the egg. Finally after a minute the egg broke open revealing a blue dragon with a tint of green witch you could see when the light reflected its scales just right the dragon looked around for a few seconds then looked right at feanaro as if it was looking into him or his soul feanaro wanted to cry as he reached out his hand to touch the dragon. Once his skin touched scale a tingle like that of ice water flowing through his veins ran over him and feanaro felt a strange sensation as the mark formed on his palm marking his bond with the dragon an marking him as a rider.
(I know this is probably crappy but I was worried by the time I came up with a good rider all the eggs would be taken so I made this all up as I went on filling everything out any objections observations hints and tips I will gladly mustn't to and I will change what ever you guys deem not fit)
Dragon bio:
Name:draven
Age:2
Physical description: draven is a male dragon with blue scales with a hint of green that makes him seem a darker blue till the light reflects off his scales then you can see his hint of green.draven also has spikes going down his neck almost to the shoulders ending ear the neck and shoulders meet.
Wear they hatched: ellesmera
Personality: draven is quite playfully and cheerful he enjoys feanaro and the fun They have jokeing an talking he is also stubborn often argueing with feanaro when he thinks he is write and the elf wrong. Draven is also as much of a competitor as feanaro and like his rider he shares his thirst for knowledge and peace willing to destroy any who wish to harm the innocent.
Password:[[witch]] [of terim]]
Other name: glennodad
Race: elf
Birthplace: ellesmera
Age: 53
Gender: Male
Birthday: first week of winter
Eyes: hazel greenish eyes
Hair: dark brown medium length and messy
Weight:205lbs
Height:5'10
Magic user: yes
Preferred weapons: feanaro carries two short swords on his back they are both paper thin and slightly curves as the blades reache there tip instead if a rider blade he had the two short swords made. On his hip he carries a hunting knife. Feanaro also has an elven bow he sung from a tree strung up on his back and a quill full of goose feathered arrows
Appearance: feanaro is slightly more stalky then most elfs due to his obsession with swordsmanship and training he is very lean with smooth skin his eyes are slightly narrow giving the appreance of squinting slightly . he sports a vest with a long sleeve shirt under it with pants and brown boots
Likes: sparring,reading,nature,animals,meditation, praticeing magic,flying and being with draven.
Dislikes:war,evil,dishonor,
Strength: his ability for quick thinking, never willing to admit defeat,swordsmanship, hand to hand combat,
Weakness: tends to think harder not smarter, can be arrogant at times or seem thingyy, he knows a lot about magic but tends to have trouble with spells. He also tends to go with brute force when he gets angry. Also has a bad temper but keeps it at bay but once he is angered feanaro will do and say things he normally wouldn't
Family: deraj (father) (solider for the queen)
Ninorc (mother)
Not so breif History: feanaro was born from his father deraj a high ranking solider to the queens army deraj was known for being well adapt with a blade. His mother ninorc who was a poet that was known for her beautyfull words and knowledge of many many things. From the time feanaro was young he wanted to follow in his fathers foot steps and be a great solider an swordsman he spent many days watching his father spar most of the time doin his best to copy deraj since his father was no longer with the army he still helped out but spent his time mastering other things. When feanaro reached proper age his father agreed to teach him all he knew if only feanaro promised to also take up studys with his mother because as his father said a sharp mind can kill just as quick as a blade. Feanaro agreed and from then he spent hours with his father when they could learning foot work,stances,attacks and counter attacks Then on some days he learned how to use his hands and feet as well most sessions ended with feanaro tierd,bruised and sore. On his days to rest feanaro spent the time reading and studying and thanks to his mother he gaind a love of books and the thirst for knowledge they posses.
As feanaro grew in age and skill his parients aided him in different aspects his father with combat and all its aspect fighting with and with out weapons.from his mother he learned meditation how to guard and reach out with his mind how to love and respect nature and all its inhabitants. One of feanaros favorite things to read about an hear about were the dragon Riders once he got a taste of the riders he couldn't get enugh he wanted to be one so bad it made his very heart ache it became his obsession he strived to be as good as the riders in all aspects. So for years feanaro put his heart and soul into being the best he could be but his main weakness his anger halted him in some ways for he would grow angry in sparring with his father for he could hardly touch him so he would lose most sense and attack blindly no matter how many times his father told him "an angry mind is a narrow mind". With his studies he grew upset when struggling with spells causing him to give up easily feanaro knew it took time to be as wise as his parients but he wanted to be the best and didn't want to wait.
As years passed an feanaro reached his adult hood of 18 he wanted to be a solider just like his father. At his age he was quite good with his swords for at one point his father suggested two short swords instead of on long sword after that feanaro noticed a difference in his matches with his father he was articulate above his years as well. after much talk and heavy pondering his parients agreed to allow feanaro to join the queens army instead of becoming a scholar After fortyfive years in the queens army feanaro grew into a man his endless training in magic and swordsmanship as most all elves are most efficient in both he grew into his frame becoming good looking and growing lean muscle. He noticed in training that thanks to his parients he exceeded most when training but his temper still earned him cuts breaks and bruises that could have been otherwise avoided Since the elves helped the vardens cause feanaro spent a lot of time ferrying between ellesmera and the varden helping wear ever he could wile also still practiceing when he could with his parients.
Around his 45th year as a solider feanaro was summond to the queens chambers in the early hours of the morning along with a few other highly skilld higher ranking soldiers. The queen informed them that the varden had come apon a dragon egg and fearing for its safety wanted the elves to take it for safe keeping and to see if it would hatch. There orders were to get the egg safely from the varden to ellesmera at any cost Over come with excitement feanaro did well to keep fealings hidden the thought seeing a dragon egg and possibly a new rider excited him beyond anything he felt before.after swearing oaths in the ancient language the group was sent off to get ready for they had to set off at once Feanaro informed his parients that he had a mission to go on but couldn't tell them what due to his oaths and at dawn him and his group set off.
It took longer then feanaro had expected but he figured that was his over anxiousness takeing over but the trip went smoothly besides running the ocassional urgles.once they arrived at the varden they had no time to stay ajihad the leader of the varden met them in secret to hand the egg off almost as quickly as they got there they left. The trip back to ellesmera was a tense one feanaro kept his cool but he expected to be attacked any momment and at every turn but there return went without trouble.the trip to the varden and back was a long one and feanaro was glad it was over he longed to see his parients and to get the egg to safety once they arrived home feanaro and his comrades hurried to the queens chambers to present her with the egg. Once the queen took the bundle from feanaro she unwrapped it revealing a greenish blue dragon egg feanaro couldn't keep his eyes off the egg it was perfect and beautiful smooth all around with small silver lines running round it like veins. He watched as the queen placed the egg on a table with a groove dug in it for the egg to sit in with out falling the queen looking more pleased then she has in some time then informed feanaro and his brothers in arms that for there services they will each be able to approach the egg to see if it will hatch.
Feanaro wanted to faint from excitement he knew that the odds of the dragon egg hatching for him would be slim but the prospect of even being one of the first made him want to back flip for joy but he held his composer. After about 5of his friends and comrades approached the egg with no luck it was feanaros turn his child hood dreams rushing thru his head like a blur everything he worked for and day dreamed about was sitting right infront of him all it had to do was hatch. Feanaro approached the egg cautiously and slowly worried that it wouldn't hatch for him but finally the momment arrived and he stood infront of the egg. "This is it" he thought as his hand extended to touch the egg it was smoother then any gem and warm to the touch feanaro grew grim when he felt the slow beat of a heart from within and then the egg stirred for a momment and fell silent and still. Removing his hand feanaro hung his head and stept away and began to head for the exit when the egg sturdier again but this time more violent and then a small crack appeared on the egg. his heart was almost in his throte as he stept back to the table and the egg shook an cracked again Feanaro looked at the others In the the room the queen seemed excited as well as the others some were looking at him and some the egg. Finally after a minute the egg broke open revealing a blue dragon with a tint of green witch you could see when the light reflected its scales just right the dragon looked around for a few seconds then looked right at feanaro as if it was looking into him or his soul feanaro wanted to cry as he reached out his hand to touch the dragon. Once his skin touched scale a tingle like that of ice water flowing through his veins ran over him and feanaro felt a strange sensation as the mark formed on his palm marking his bond with the dragon an marking him as a rider.
(I know this is probably crappy but I was worried by the time I came up with a good rider all the eggs would be taken so I made this all up as I went on filling everything out any objections observations hints and tips I will gladly mustn't to and I will change what ever you guys deem not fit)
Dragon bio:
Name:draven
Age:2
Physical description: draven is a male dragon with blue scales with a hint of green that makes him seem a darker blue till the light reflects off his scales then you can see his hint of green.draven also has spikes going down his neck almost to the shoulders ending ear the neck and shoulders meet.
Wear they hatched: ellesmera
Personality: draven is quite playfully and cheerful he enjoys feanaro and the fun They have jokeing an talking he is also stubborn often argueing with feanaro when he thinks he is write and the elf wrong. Draven is also as much of a competitor as feanaro and like his rider he shares his thirst for knowledge and peace willing to destroy any who wish to harm the innocent.
Password:[[witch]] [of terim]]