Dragon Rider [WIP]

[Brenton]

Full Name: Konner Derriksson
Other name: Argetlam, Dragon Rider, Assassin, Silent One, Shurtugal, Knight of Stone
Race: (human, elf, half-elf, urgal, dwarf, etc) Human
Side: (varden, empire, neutral, other) Varden

Birthplace: Farthen Dur
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Birthday: Summer Solstice

Eyes: Brown
Hair: Shortish medium blonde hair with black roots
Weight: 220 lbs
Height: Six feet and Two inches

Magic User: Yes

Preferred Weapon(s): Bow and Arrow, duel swords, throwing daggers, hidden blades (Yes like Assassin's Creed)

Appearance: (What does he/she look like? What kind of clothing does he/she wear? Scars?) Tall and broad shouldered. He has fine facial features and stubble for facial hair. Deep set eyes that make it look like he is deep in thought. Konner often times is seen in a set of armor with his weapons strapped on over a red and black hooded "assassin's" cloak.

Personality: (Weak willed? Strong hearted? Charismatic? Loner? How does he/she react with others?) Often times called a leader because he is able to sway the minds and hearts of many people. In a sense he is much like Eragon and Roran because he can do many things that most cannot with changing people and getting them to move entire cities.

--->Likes: Magic, Talon, Running, horseback riding
--->Dislikes: Empire, Deserters, Oath-breakers
--->Strengths: Sword fighting, archery, throwing weapons, magic
--->Weakness: Heavy weaponry, agile fighters, strong magic users

Family:

Father - Derrik Naerthsson

Mother - Serena Allanassdaughter


History: (a couple of paragraphs minimum - more for elves/dragon riders etc)

Konner was born on the Summer solstice in Farthen Dur to a middle class woman and an upper class soldier while there was a relatively peaceful time. During the time Orik took interest in him while he grew up because Konner immediately showed skill in magic and fighting. At the age of five Konner was immediately taught how to hold a sword and began his training in how to defend his mind. If not for that he would've been assaulted by the twins when they discovered his skills at the age of fifteen. Yet that did not happen.

Konner grew stronger and started out as a mercenary. He traveled across the country for a few years and learned to fight better. When he was sixteen, Konner was attacked by a group of urgals and forced to go back to Farthen Dur. As soon as he made it back he was confronted by Orik who told him about the egg he was to see.

Konner looked at the egg every day for two weeks. When he was visiting the egg two weeks later it hatched and Orik gave a shout of joy. As soon as Talon hatched the baby dragon ran up to Konner and touched his head to his palm. Immediately Konner had passed out and woke a few days later with a mark that was silver on his palm that wrapped around his wrist and into a T shape on the back of his hand. Konner blinked a few times and saw the baby dragon who he decided he would name. After deciding that a voice sounded in his head.

The dragon was to be named Talon, for that was his command from Talon. When that was done, Konner and Talon trained for a few years. They trained and learned more about each other until finally Orik decided they should be sent to Oromis and Brom. Unfortunately the two couldn't find Brom so they went to Ellesmera.

On the way Talon grew to the size to be able to ride. Konner started training with Talon on how to fly and they made it to Ellesmera. For five years the two alternated training between Oromis and the knights beneath Orik. When they were deemed to be ready, Oromis sent Konner and Talon back to Farthen Dur. There they were confronted with what was turning into a violent war. Quickly Konner was knighted by Orik and they were told that they couldn't allow their identities to be known. Since then they have sworn fealty to Orik and in part to Nasuada who has agreed that they should be allowed to be kept secret.



Anything extra: (Here is where you add the Dragon Creation Form if you are applying to be a rider.)

Dragon Bio
Name: Talon Fireclaw

Side: (varden, empire, neutral, other) Varden

Birthplace: (where he/she hatched) Farthen Dur
Was his/her egg in the wild or with the empire/varden: Varden
If Dragon Rider, how did the rider find the egg?: (stolen, given, found in wild?) Given by Orik to Konner in secret
Age: 5 years of age
Gender: Male

Eyes: Red
Scale Color: Dark red almost a blood red

Appearance: (What does he/she look like? What stands out about him/her? Scars?) Massive in size about a Saphira and a half. Thickly muscled with long legs and wings. Black horns and claws

Personality: (Weak willed? Strong hearted? Charismatic? Loner? How does he/she react with others?) Same as Konner except more aggressive

--->Likes: Konner, Varden, flying, hunting, fighting
--->Dislikes: Empire, weak prey, anyone who lies or flees in a fight
--->Strengths: Arial combat, fire breathing, swimming, hunting
--->Weakness: Ground combat, running, defense against arrows

[Aelodil]

Very nice. But if you would add Talon into the history a lil more it'd be better. Other than that, accepted. I'll move this to fhe Accepted Characters once you fix the facg that Talon was barely mentioned.

[Brenton]

Done

[Aelodil]

Great job! Accepted. I'll move this to the Accepted Characters forum