Characters of Importance

[Brenton]

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Brenton Bromsson - Elven Prince of great power

Brenton is a young royal member of relation to the elven race and has been frequently thought of as a mistake that should of never existed. He was once a carefree soul who had only one regret, never seeing his father or siblings. Yet he was raised learning the arts of the elfin prowess.

The prince was an impulsive rebel when his mother, Islanzadi, had told him he couldn't contact his family. So Brenton had taken off in the middle of the night and tried to find Brom and Arya. It had been a very eventful life when Brenton found an egg and a sword that had been lost. He didn't know what it was, so he had kept possession of them.

When Brenton's egg hatched, and Vaentr was born to him, Brenton soon became a caring person. Yet it was when he found a new stone that was rather large that he realized what was happening. Brenton was taken captive by the Empire and was forced into servitude.

Brenton is a very impulsive fighter and very rarely thinks through his strategies, if they exist. He hates when other people act like they are better than he is, since it always turns into a big-headed brawl. Brenton was able to change his name during a captive's escape from Helgrind.

After the prince allowed the captive to escape from the cells, he was forced into a fight with the Empire rider, Uruale, and he narrowly beat the enemy. It was then that he was taken to the Varden and Brenton left for Ellesmera.

Brenton was able to find another rider in the forest of the elves and he took it upon himself to train Feanaro as his pupil. The Elven Prince lives in Ellesmera at the moment and is currently training Feanaro Shadeslayer while he learns the Ancient Language as a brush up.

INTERACTIONS

Vaentr - This is Brenton's soul partner and longest friend. He is a great dragon of deep blue scales and a large heart that cares for Brenton. He is a creature of great importance to Brenton and his family. Vaentr was a key factor in the changing of their names. ((Ally and Soul Partner))

Feanaro Shadeslayer - Feanaro is a younger rider that he met in Ellesmera. Brenton took it upon himself to train the rider and his young dragon. He is one that never thought little of Brenton because of his past. ((Pupil in Dragon Rider training))

Islanzadi - Mother of Brenton but she hasn't spoken to him in 12 years because her son has been an Empire rider. ((Neutral but Mother))

Murtagh Morzansson - Murtagh is Brenton's brother through Eragon and he was the one that told Brenton of how Brom died. ((Neutral))

Zander - A Varden rider that aided Brenton in his release of the Empire captive. ((Ally))

Nandon - Empire captive that Brenton freed when he changed his name and evaded the Empire. ((Ally))

Kvisa - Shade that was able to force an oath upon him before Nandon was freed. ((Foe))

Uruale - Empire rider that Brenton defeated in his desperate escape from their servitude. He swore Uruale's death upon the Ancient Language and will either die or kill his foe. ((Foe))


Bristven Bane of Riders - Rogue Shade of Power

Bristven is a child of Selena and Morzan who was hidden from her father. It was when she was young that her caretaker died and revealed who her true parents were that she left. Bristven was originally called Fern but she was taken captive at the edge of Carvahall and transported to the Empire. Bristven was able to channel spirits through her and become a shade. She soon became a rogue shade and now is in a chase with Kvisa's plan.


INTERACTIONS

Kvisa - A shade that was able to convince Bristven to follow an elf woman to some mysterious power. ((Ally))

Feanaro Shadeslayer - A rider that was in her way in her search for the mysterious powers. Bristven is currently planning the death of her foe. ((Foe))

Uruale - A competetive rider that is also searching for the mysterious power. ((Neutral but close to Foe))

Rhaxta - An elven woman that Kvisa sent Bristven to follow to find a mysterious power. She is currently just a tracking creature. ((Neutral))

[Rhaxta]

I like muchly . Can you just add some distinction between the characters interacted with? I mean, friend, ally, neutral, enemy. etc

[fëanàro]

Feanaro- feanaro shadeslayer

Son of deraj (commander in the elves army)an Nerwen(scholar,herbalist ) his dragon is a year old black male named jarkore . Before jarkore hatched for fean he spent his entire life as a student under his parients learning everything from combat an hunting to magic and botany. Fean is netural at the momment

Interacted with :
Nandon (friend)
Brenton (flamebreath) (new master an teacher)
Rhaxta (neutral )
Uruael (neutral)
Link (friend)
Bristven (enemie)

[Nepherion]

Nepherion

The Immaculate Human Of Change [/center][/color]

Nepherion is a rebellious, strong willed youth who's reckless actions and sense of adventure has placed him in trouble more than a couple of times. His rambunctious attitude leads many to believe him to be a free spirit which for the most part he is.

He digs deep into the mysteries of the world, finding himself many times over reading the adventures of Eragon Shadeslayer in the rebel forces of the Varden in Galbatorix's notice boards. His imagination becomes enchanted with visions of the adventures he could have as a Dragon Rider himself. His thought process usually ends up putting him into a land of adventure and gives him free reign of his own destiny. Usually putting him off into a daze in reality.

He has unwavering courage and determination, that comes with a strong moral compass. Though in the past he had held himself from interfering with the Empires brutality, it seems lately he has been very intolerant of them. Doing everything he can to put their actions in his town to rest without causing any harm to himself. As of lately he's been taking alot more risks in obtaining the peace he wishes for his village and all of Alageasia.

When angered Nepherion can be heartless, merciless, and without the right discipline plain destructive. He cares little for one's back drop and would more than likely be the first to initiate attack. In combat he fights on instincts and is naturally talented in both the art of the blade and chained dagger. He uses unpredictable moves that allows him to gain the upper hand and almost decimate his opponents. His most useful trait in battle is his need to understand.

Interactions

• Starlight: Nepherion's soul brother and friend. Nothing in this world could compare to the bond the two shares. Nepherion cares for him more than himself and like-wise Starlight is the same. They would both easily sacrifice themselves for the safety of the other and takes the greatest of comfort indulging in each others company. Nepherion truly loves Starlight and would just as recklessly face the King to protect him. (Bonded-Dragon)
  
• Nandon: Friend and Mentor. Nandon was the first elf that the orphaned had ever encountered and was there for Starlights first day. Nepherion finds advice in Nandon's words and most of the time comes to him for help with training. Lately he has found himself growing slightly distant from him as he comes to grip with his transformation. (Ally)
  
• Eragon Shadeslayer: Eragon is Nepherion's elda and above anyone else Nepherion finds comfort in his words. The two barely communicate but the two have been through similar situations. So when they do speak, Nepherion find answers in the question that confounded him before. (Ally)
  
• Feanaro: A friend that comes and goes like the wind. The two has formed bonds and he would help Fea in the most desperate of situations. (Ally)
  
• Emiryal: A empire Rider that at one time fooled him into thinking he had changed his name in the ancient language. The two talked about training but has had no interaction outside that. Nepherion finds himself thinking on him and his dark dragon from time to time. (Neutral)
  
• Bid'Daum: The eldest of all Rider dragons and one with power that surpasses even of that Umaroth. He commands complete respect from anyone and his power is that of the Beor Mountains manifested. As a living dragon he was ridden by the first Eragon and has served as a manipulator of current events in their wait. He is currently with Nepherion and Starlight. Guiding them to new power. (Ally)
  

Uruale Nerosson

The Scourge Of Old Times[/center][/color]

Uruale is a angry, misunderstood, youth who only wishes to receive the praise he deserves. He has many times over proven his deep loyalty to the Empire and Galbatorix's cause. But has yet to see any prize given to him, besides the rank of Captain. Because of this he has little patience for those that block his path, even his own soldiers. Being known to debilitate them when necessary he has been called merciless by many of his own men.

More than anything else Uruale takes pride in his self persevering instincts. It was these instincts and deep seeded emotions that pushed him through the dark years of slavery. He has more than a primal urge, more than a embedded will. His need to live is one of the strongest emotions that dwells within him. Like most Riders, Uruale takes great care of Flare. The dragon means just as much to him as his own self perseverance. She is the only being he is willing to sacrifice himself for.

Coldblooded, Heartless, a One man Army. These are the words and statements used to describe the Captain in combat. He takes the King's enemies out without fail or desecration. He is willing to behead an enemy in front of their loved ones if need be. He believes this to be one of the reasons for the King's interest in him. His ruthlessness and instinctive rampage on the field of war is his most primal emotions.

Though brute combat has never lead him astray, Uruale is not incapable of coming up with a strategy when need be. His bond with Flare has brought docility to his chaotic mind during combat, which has allowed him to become a even more effective fighter. His authority over his troops during combat goes unquestioned due to the fear that has circulated around during his fits in wars. It has caused many to dub him the " King's Fury "

And though the man may seem heartless, and demonic. He has an affectionate and loving side that only three has ever seen. His late mother, his late girlfriend, and his only companion Flare. He sometimes vents to her his worries of himself being swallowed up by the King's cause. But quickly shoves this in a bottle and continues on with his duties. He has little to fear and yet he fears himself most of all. A life with little meaning, is what he calls himself in private.

Interactions

• Flare: Uruale's dragon and best friend. The two are joined by a bond that was forged for the purpose of exposing each others weaknesses and strengths to the fullest. Uraule loves Flare, though his personality complete forbids him from showing it to her all the time. The two would go to war with the world together and believe each other strong enough to come out on top. They equally share a strong drive to be the best. ( Bonded-Dragon)
  
• Kvisa: A shade elf that represents nothing but the tilting evil that could throw Uruale into total chaos. Her manipulating and alluring ways can easily place Uruale in the sit of the throne. He is confused on his feelings for her, but is very cautious when she is around. (Neutral)
  
• Rhaxta: A elf with unknown power residing within her. She, like Kvisa is a representation of Uraule titling pendulum. She could just as easily changed him for the better as Kvisa could for the worse. He is confused on his feelings for her, but very at ease when around her. (Ally)
  
• Freyja: A wandering traveler that Uraule was ordered to escort to the Fallen King. During their travels Uruale has grown especially close to her and finds her company soothing. He is confused on his feelings for her. (Ally)
  
• Brenton Bromsson: He is a prey to Uruale and a person he had sworn to kill in the ancient language. He refuses to allow him to live, so unless he comes to peace with an inner struggle then either he will die or Brenton will die one day. (Enemy)
  
• Murtagh Morzansson: A rival that he considers worthy of all his strength and power. Uruale finds himself most the time chasing after his ever growing power. It is Murtagh who pushed Uruale to continue growing stronger. ( Neutral)
  
• Glareran: He has met little of this boy but finds him irritating as he helped Nandon escape and opposes him as a fellow Dragon Rider. He has also sworn the death of this lad in the ancient language. (Enemy)
  
• Nandon: Once a prisoner but thanks to the meddling of a elven prince and varden rider he escaped. But not without scars. Uruale has sworn his death in the ancient language. (Enemy)
  

(ooc= anything else you want me to add let me know)

[Freyja]

[Not sure if Freyja qualifies as a "character of importance" but Neph told me so... so here goes nothing . Oh and the post isn't finished, this is like a first draft; I'll edit it later today and add more details on her personality]

Freyja Genovefasdaughter

Freyja is an ex-whaler from Narda, a small village separated from the rest of the Empire by the Spine. She is a very resourceful and years growing up around the docks has hardened both her body and mind. Freyja learned at a very young age that hard work always pays off and always strives to do her best, no matter what the task she or others have bestowed upon her to complete. Her stubbornness has gotten her in trouble more than once and though sometimes her obstinacy to do things a specific way has paid off, most times it simply irritated the ones around her.

After her groom deserted her at the altar, Freyja left Narda with the promise of never going back. The event seemed to seed in her a certain form of repressed and primitive anger even Freyja isn’t aware of though she sometimes feels the tendrils of hate wrap themselves around her mind. From that day on, Freyja discovered a new side of herself she never knew existed: her spite. Though she tries her best to subdue those feelings, Freyja cannot contain them when someone crosses her, intentionally or not.

Although her runaway groom sparked in her emotions she never wanted to develop, Freyja tries to overcome the emotional scars by pushing hurtful memories aside and trying her best to be friendly with everyone she meets. Once she starts caring for someone, she doesn't mind showing her affection to that person and will do almost anything to please them. Though it might seem as if she gave her trust to barely anyone because of her candidness, the truth is far it.

Her fear of being hurt like the day of her aborted wedding has made her stingy with her trust. But once Freyja gives her trust to someone, she will go to hell and back for them and would rather tear out her own heart than to harm them.

Her travels have helped her clear her mind a bit and also made her discover her love for the liberty of free-roaming at her own pace. Her new-found freedom is something she isn’t willing to give up and her reluctance to chain herself to anything is reflected in her unwillingness to choose sides in any kind of situation. Freyja prefers staying neutral and even though she has a deep-rooted sense of what is wrong or right, she prefers to abide by her own rules and bring about justice in her own way.

Although Freyja hates to admit it to anyone, especially to herself, her fear has a very strong hold on her mind. She has difficulty keeping her fright in check and will sometimes be paralyzed by it, unable to move or speak until she either passes out or the threat is leaves. Though it pains and shames her, Freyja has a deep-rooted flight instinct and will, at times, bolt from any dangerous situation if she thinks her life is at risk.


Interactions:

Valeo: A trustworthy steed and a traveling companion, Valeo is more than a simple mean of transportation for Freyja. She enjoys spending time with him and is very in tune with his body language which warns her sometimes of upcoming dangers such as wild animals. They share a very strong bond and care deeply for the other one though both show it in different ways. His swift hooves have saved Freyja more than once and for that she is still grateful. (Ally)

Brenton: Freyja isn't too fond of the elf prince. Propaganda from the Empire has made her untrusty of the elfs and Brenton as well. She does't want anything to do with Brenton and would rather never see him again as his presence unsettles her and makes her scared. (Neutral/feared)

Vaentr: Freyja only glimpsed at the blue dragon and nearly fainted out of fright. She is terrified of him and would rather never cross path with it for fear of being considered nothing more than a prey and be gobbled up by him. (Feared)

Uruale: Freyja's new traveling companion, Uruale is both a mystery and a would-be friend for Freyja. She enjoys being around him as she feels protected and safe when in his proximity. Uruale interest Freyja in many ways and, although they haven't known each other for long, she has already a good esteem of him and thinks he is a capable person. Freyja has mixed feelings about Uruale but cannot deny the slight attraction she feels for him. She tries her best to deny, discourage and hide those feelings as best as she can. (Ally)