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Post by Jamaric Alcita Jr. on Jan 17, 2006 19:39:37 GMT -5
Outside the mighty city at a small camp in the middle of a fallow feild, something dark is coming anew. A bond of pure Evil has just been created. The shade, Lucarz, and the Rider, Kane, have joined to gether on a quest to bring down the Varden by biulding an Army one by one. They will hunt down those who oppose their mighty king. It is a sad day indeed.
"Get up you fool!" kane shouts as he kicks the sleeping shade. "It is almost time to go." It was early in the morn about dawn and Kane wanted to get an early start on their long trip. He set off to ready his partner Craven. Soon he was ready to go and found the shade still asleep. " Wake up now!" he yelled as his anger began to build.
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Post by vardenspy on Jan 17, 2006 23:16:04 GMT -5
Alatariel Ringeril didn't like to be awoken early in the morning. This morning was especially one of them. She scratched the tiredness out of her eyes. Then she had to adjust to the inside of her tent. Where am I? Wow I think i forgot where i was for a second... That can't happen again! That was just really weird... Oh well... I definitly won't be getting any more sleep now. I might as well just get up! Then she got up, looked around, shook her head, then laughed a spooked laugh. A laugh of someone that didn't know where they were at, what they were doing, etc. But then it all came back to her, like a whip slapping her in the face. Now I remember!!phew!!! Then she stomped out of the tent, looked around, then asked Kane, "whats the yelling for? I'm not a morning person, if you haven't already seen as it is! Oh well, forget it now, i'm awake as can be!" Then she stomped off to find a stream or something to wash all of the dirt and sand off of her face.
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Post by Metri on Jan 17, 2006 23:31:03 GMT -5
((You have to make a char sheet before you can post in the rpg so please do so first.))
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Post by Niniel on Jan 17, 2006 23:31:48 GMT -5
Ok, where to begin... You're new here, right? So I'm assuming that you've chosen to completely skip reading the rules; not the best thing to do here. See, this site is devoted to quality RPing. If you want to participate here, you need to read the rules, and then stick to them. Our patience is only so long, so don't try us. I'm going to let this one slide for now.. but if I see another post like this one, you will be warned and there will be action taken against you. So.. before you post again, read the rules, and if you want to RP, make a character sheet. Oh, and just to let you know, the name Eve is already taken for a character, mine actually.. so yeah.
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Post by dragonsheart on Jan 18, 2006 14:42:16 GMT -5
Lucarz woke up and said"I'm coming!" He tried to get up but he was unsucessful because of the fact that he could not move his left foot. Eventually,after trying for a few minutes,he was able to get up. He stood up and said, with a mild smirk on his face,"Try not to wake me unless it is important." He did a few stretches and looked around for his food. Now, getting angry he said "Who took my dried meat?" Looked at the ground and picked up some dried meat that had soil covering most of it. He Frowned,grunted,and used some of his water to clean it off.
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Post by Niniel on Jan 18, 2006 14:57:07 GMT -5
K.. Lucarz... you need to be talked to as well.. This post is unacceptable. You should have read the rules by now, especially if you're character is approved. If you don't know what a good post is supposed to look like, then feel free to go read some of the other RP posts made by Danny, Tavimh, Ragond, Metri, or myself just to name a few. To be perfectly honest with you, this post was one of the worst I've seen, and you're going to have to do better to continue participating here at this site.
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Post by dragonsheart on Jan 18, 2006 15:19:42 GMT -5
there was nothing wrong with it.i read the fucking rules.these are meaningfull.kane and I are staring roleplay about us gathering soldiers for the empire.this was a prep post for our roleplay.ok.do you understand me.i am not trying to be an ass like i am in real life but i just want you tomundertand me an why i am getting pissed off!thank you and have a good whatever.
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Post by Niniel on Jan 18, 2006 15:24:14 GMT -5
Allright, you've been warned. I told you that you need to work on things and all you are doing is arguing, so guess what.. you're banned for two days. Hopefully when that time is up you will be more willing to cooperate with us and work harder on your writing skills, because we want good posts.. not crappy ones.
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Post by Metri on Jan 18, 2006 18:01:55 GMT -5
I could give you three reasons off the back why your post is bad. 1. You don't reach the word min of 75 words. 2. You don't capitilize and 3. You rp with "he wakes up tiring to stand but he couldnt." Instead of Lucarz woke up trying to stand but he wasn't successful.
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