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Post by rebellion on Aug 5, 2012 19:01:26 GMT -5
DELETED APPLICATION
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Post by rebellion on Aug 10, 2012 7:20:28 GMT -5
I'm done with the application
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Post by Ash & Jackle on Aug 10, 2012 8:20:27 GMT -5
((First time looking over an application to approve or not...  Rhax, correct me if i am wrong plz)) Maybe a little more detail on history, for two reasons: 1) He is an elf, something more must have happened in his life 2) He is a rider, so more on how he found the egg wrapped in leather or why he went to the tower in the middle of the desert, because one second he is in elesmira, the next he is moving to a random tower in the hadarac desert. Also, maybe a bit more on why he wanted to become an assassin and where his outpost is. Otherwise Good. (Rhax overrules me on this, if she accepts disregard this) |
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Post by rebellion on Aug 10, 2012 17:10:39 GMT -5
((Alright I guess I can add more detail.))
This part is in between his celebration and the tower.
Synthrim left late that night while everyone was asleep. Before he actually took off for an unknown destination, Synthrim gathered his weapons and shield. In his bags he placed several loaves of bread and some cheese and berries. Synthrim loaded his stuff on his horse and departed. Three days passed as the half-breed traveled through Du Weldenvarden. On the edge of the forest, Synthrim unloaded all of his remaining supplies and strapped them on his back. He then released his horse. When that was finished, Synthrim walked Southwest toward the Hadarac desert. Two days into the trip, the werecat-elf stumbled upon an old block that looked to be from an ancient construct. Following what ruins he could, Synthrim found a tower that appeared to have some supplies. Synthrim decided he would use this ruins as his personal residential area.
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Post by Ash & Jackle on Aug 10, 2012 21:00:13 GMT -5
Over rulled.
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Post by Rhaxta on Aug 13, 2012 11:57:03 GMT -5
Sorry late reply~ I like but there is just too much going on. He cannot be a rider, elf, werecat and assassin with a mystical sword (does the sword have any extra powers or strengths compared to a 'normal' sword by the way?) without any significant limitations. Plus have a look at the detail and length of accepted rider applications to get a good idea what you're aiming for.
To be a rider and werecat you will have to come up with some negative aspect to it~ a weakness because of it - such as not as strong in magic or something. Sorry crap reply on phone and it's a pain to use.
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Post by rebellion on Aug 14, 2012 17:01:41 GMT -5
Sorry...Spirit has no magical powers at all. It is just made from an unknown alloy that is found only once. The blade cannot be broken by anything naturally thrown. Strong magical forces (jierda doesn't count) can destroy the sword. Other than that, it is normal. It can be broken if another person can figure out a way to attack stronger than jierda. Also, Spirit has nothing that can hold energy inside it.
And since Synthrim is a halfling with werecat blood, he is weaker in magic unless he is really inspired (sorry I'm unsure of the magical abilities of a werecat). His magical strength is 2/3 that of an elf.
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Post by Ash & Jackle on Aug 15, 2012 10:48:01 GMT -5
maybe something more about the hinderances, because the pact was only with elfs and humans at this point, not werecat, so the werecat half would not have wanted to bond, so how did Kaztreen get over that?
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Post by Rhaxta on Aug 15, 2012 12:03:48 GMT -5
Were cats have no magical abilities ~ but that sounds fair to me. I would like you to answer ashs question but I am happy to accept this now. :-) have fun!
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Post by rebellion on Aug 17, 2012 9:38:43 GMT -5
Answer to Ashs Question:
Really, I would have to say that this is how it would be. Since Synthrim is part elf, that would be his rider half. Yet when he is in his werecat shape, Synthrim would be inclined to be his own person. When he first started morphing between elf and werecat, Synthrim trained himself to only spend the night as a feline creature.
Thank you Rhaxta and Ash
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Post by Ash & Jackle on Aug 17, 2012 12:59:33 GMT -5
yes, but the werecat part would have refused the bond, even if he didn't look like a werecat, the blood, dna, whatever was still present, so how did the dragon force the bond on to Synthrim? Look at the quote i got from Emiryals new character, Rakio, who is 25% gray folk:
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Thats what I am talking about. something bad happend to make the bond seal permanantly.
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Post by rebellion on Aug 17, 2012 16:10:11 GMT -5
Alright this post-fail is pissing me off! Anyhow, here's the way it happened, short version.
Synthrim spent two nights as a rider before the weakened bond shattered. Upon speaking to Kaztreen, Synthrim decided it was too late. Kaztreen was inspired to use magic, so he breathed a heatless flame over Synthrim while the halfling slept.
Synthrim spent three days in a coma. When he woke up, his appearance was changed and he had the gedwey ignasia that was shaped like a werecat's paw.
The description was as follows:
Synthrim soon developed a sheen that covered his flesh. The flesh turned into dragon's scales that were nearly invisible. His skin color was a strange holographic flame pattern that changed with each movement. His teeth sharpened and lengthened into dragon canines (to scale of course)
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Post by Ash & Jackle on Aug 18, 2012 22:05:22 GMT -5
...interesting... i like.... but two things:
1) So he isn't over powered the dragon scales are merely, let us call it decoration, not armor.
2) Teeth are not weapons(Same reason as above)
Accepted in my eyes. Rhax said yes, have fun roll playing!
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