Oromis (if he's still free)

[Vavrinec]

Needs more detailing on likes/dislikes and personality.

[Tchar]

sorry. Is that enough?

[Ragond]

Birthplace: Ellesmera < I think he was born in Illira(What Uru'bean used to be called)

Age : unkown but he's older than the Fall of the riders < make that 250-300 somthing, its what I would guess, because he was an elder rider at the begining of the Fall I suppose he could even be over 200 years old. It says in Eldest that he is "Old beyond mesure"


Preferred Weapon(s) : brass coloured dragon rider sword < Its name is Naegling

It still needs a bit more detail in likes/dislikes and personality. I think he seems calm and not easily angered.

You have no history.

Glaedr. Is gold, He is missing one of his legs,
Age:unkown (hundreds of years) < make that a little younger than Oromis.
colour: gold

[Tchar]

there I fixed it (though im still not sure if thats enough )

[Ragond]

Pretty good, and because its a cannon I'll wait to see what another mod thinks before I approve it. Perhaps it could do with a bit more in the history, he was captured by the forsworn, and that was when the magic within him was broken.

[Nihael]

I would suggest that you not copy out Ragond's wording word for word as that proves nothing of your own prowess other than the fact that you can highlight some and copy and paste it(plus he used rough wording as isnt that great). Pklus I dont think he was quite angry at Eragon about the whole Elva thing(I might be wrong) he merely just told him what he had done wrong and the consequences of it(maybe annoyied but i dont think angry, Angela on the other hand she was ANGRY)

[dannylam4]

I'd add more to the history. What you've done recently like training Eragon and such.

[Tchar]

... actually I think Im gonna go with my Shade character instead of Oromis. Because I think he would be quite boring... ;D

[Ragond]

Okay then, nevermind. I'll just plop this over in archives.