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Nihael Rider Putting the XY back in sexy.[M:0] ABO Member Posts: 1,000	zargon Jan 11, 2006 22:57:06 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Nihael on Jan 11, 2006 22:57:06 GMT -5 ummm I would suggest that you make him alot older as 20 for elves is YOUNG... and the whole thing needs alot more detail, history, etc...

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zargon Jan 11, 2006 23:46:52 GMT -5

Post by Niniel on Jan 11, 2006 23:46:52 GMT -5

Yeah, I'd say that a 20 year old elf is the equivalent of a toddler human child. It needs a ton more detail in your history area, likes/dislikes, and personality. Put a little effort into this, make it as detailed as you possibly can. Make the character your own, any one can make a simple generic character like this one. Good luck with your changes.

zargon Guest	zargon Jan 12, 2006 12:34:49 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by zargon on Jan 12, 2006 12:34:49 GMT -5 thanks ill try again and hope that my next idea will be better

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