Nevaras (revised at bottom)

[titan4560]

Full Name: Nevaras Archon

Nickname: Nev

Race: Human

Side: Empire (If possible could be rider, character sheet says 4/5 empire riders)

Birthplace: Gil’ead

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Birthday: March 17th

Eyes: Crimson because of magic accident at age 11 (were brown)

Hair: Brown, cut short save two strands over his face

Weight: 182

Height: 5’ 11”

Magic User: If Empire Rider: Yes If Not: Yes but weak

Clothing: Deerskin Top with a white cotton shirt showing through the top. Black Cotton pants and thick deerskin boots

Preferred Weapon(s): A double sided short sword with separatable hilt if the need arises for two separate swords each blade is one and a half feet long with a half foot hilt, A small dagger with a half foot blade and quarter foot hilt. And a yew bow with ornate carvings outlined in black ink up and down the curve.

Personality / History: Reckless in battle but a skilled fighter, is patriotic and would die for the Empire. His mother was killed during a Surdan raid on Furnost, at which point he fled back to Gil’ead. When the war between the Empire and the Varden began he ran to enlist. Due to his reckless nature, managed to survive the battle of the burning plains and was relocated to Uru”baen because of his efforts in the battle.

Family: Mother (Deceased) Father (One of the Forsworn/Wyrdfell died of overuse of magic) Brother (Alive but Nevaras does not know of his exsistance)

[Vavrinec]

Its kind of short... please make it more detailed.

[titan4560]

Will do, working on it now

[titan4560]

Ok, here is my revised, more detailed Nevaras Archon Character sheet:

Full Name: Nevaras Archon

Nickname: Nev

Race: Human Rider

Side: Empire

Birthplace: Gil’ead

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Birthday: March 17th

Eyes: Crimson because of magic accident at age 11 (were brown)

Hair: Brown, cut short save two strands over his face

Weight: 182

Height: 5’ 11”

Magic User: Yes

Clothing: When working around the house Nevaras usually sports a deerskin top with a white tunic underneath, deerskin pants, and thick deerskin boots lined with rabbit fur. During battle he wore the traditional Empire soldier garments: A steel helm, steel breastplate with Galbatorix’s symbol draped across the front, steel armguards, mail-backed gloves and steel boots. After he became a rider he switched from Galbatorix's emblem to his personal crest, A white background with an indigo dragon flying downwards. He also tied an indigo strip of cloth around his head

Preferred Weapon(s): Nevaras’ usual armaments include: A double sided short sword with separatable hilt if the need arises for two separate swords each blade is one and a half feet long with a half foot hilt, A small dagger with a half foot blade and quarter foot hilt. And a yew bow with ornate carvings outlined in black ink up and down the curve.

Personality: Nevaras is usually careful, meticulous, and very composed. However, during battle an uncontrollable rage overtakes him and he becomes very dangerous. He no longer will care about his life and his only goal is slaying his enemy, whether it be by blade, bow, or magic.

History: He was born on March 17th to an average family living in the city of Gil’ead. He spent the first 6 years of his life there. Shortly before his 7th birthday his family moved to Furnost. When he was 13 years old, Surda launched a raid on Furnost that killed his mother. Having no known family left he returned to Gil’ead where he was taken in by a wealthy family. Two years later at the age of 15 he joined the Empires army. He served as a guard in Gil’ead for a year until the Battle of the Burning Plains occurred where he marched with the rest of Galbatorix’s men. During the battle, one of Galbatorix’s esteemed generals was mortally wounded. Using all of his strength he healed the general. The loss of energy caused him to pass out, and when he awoke the battle had ended and he found himself in the King’s palace in Uru’baen. He was then part of the batallion that met the Varden spies at the Vault of Souls. On his way back to Uru'baen with one of the eggs, an Indigo one, it hatched for him. When he returned he notified the King of his dragon and gladly swore oaths to him in the Ancient Language.

Family: Mother (deceased [root of hatred for Varden]) Father (deceased[One of Forsworn/Wyrdfell died of overuse of magic]) Brother (Nevaras is unaware of his exsistance)

PS: If anyone would like to RP Nevaras’ brother please message me I would greatly appreciate it.

[Vavrinec]

*nod* Much better.

[titan4560]

If at all possible could I get a verdict on the Empire Rider deal. Because depending on the outcome I would have to change my Character Sheet. Also Would it be possible to make a new account with Nevaras as my name, just to clarify things? And does the nod mean I am accepted?

[Vavrinec]

You are accepted. However, to be a rider you have to be sent the Rider's Quiz.

[titan4560]

Ok, send away I eat, drink and breath Inheritance.

PS: Thanks for the name change

[Vavrinec]

Sent.

[titan4560]

Ok, The quiz is filled out and sent. If my spelling is off its because my books are at my moms house and im at my dad's so.....yeah.

[Vavrinec]

Well done. Accepted!